No he doesn't, but both talk vaguely throughout this section. I think it's because they're stuck in between courting rituals and their unbound passion. Neither of them wants to go too fast, but they don't think they need to be slow about it.
It's all part of the main theme of young love, I think :D
Thanks! I'll fix it right now. Since I'm the only one working on it, I don't always spot everything.
I'm usually pretty good on grammar, but considering I usually do the dialogue after 2-3 hours of working on the comic itself, some typos might slip by as I type it in :x
It's all part of the main theme of young love, I think :D
However, I would like to point out a mistake in panel two; you've written "where" (adverb) instead of "were" (past tense of to be)
I'm usually pretty good on grammar, but considering I usually do the dialogue after 2-3 hours of working on the comic itself, some typos might slip by as I type it in :x
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