Chapter Four - Page Seventeen

3rd Sep 2012, 7:24 PM in Chapter Four
Chapter Four - Page Seventeen
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4th Sep 2012, 1:42 AM
That sounded like a declaration to me.
5th Sep 2012, 3:27 AM
Interesting that he actually didn't confirm that it is him yet. ;) Though I think he didn't do so in the original either.
5th Sep 2012, 11:11 AM
No he doesn't, but both talk vaguely throughout this section. I think it's because they're stuck in between courting rituals and their unbound passion. Neither of them wants to go too fast, but they don't think they need to be slow about it.

It's all part of the main theme of young love, I think :D
16th Sep 2012, 1:54 PM
I've been quite enjoying these so far!

However, I would like to point out a mistake in panel two; you've written "where" (adverb) instead of "were" (past tense of to be)
16th Sep 2012, 1:55 PM
Thanks! I'll fix it right now. Since I'm the only one working on it, I don't always spot everything.

I'm usually pretty good on grammar, but considering I usually do the dialogue after 2-3 hours of working on the comic itself, some typos might slip by as I type it in :x

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