Chapter Five - Page Fifty One

28th Feb 2013, 1:16 AM in Chapter Five
Chapter Five - Page Fifty One
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1st Mar 2013, 10:29 AM
SintraEDrien
I'm sorry, but that last panel makes her look almost . . . evil. Maybe it's the teeth? Or possibly the lack of definition of the nose on the face? She seems to be devious and calculating in that image, not a (relatively) young innocent girl in love/infatuation. (I hope I don't offend you, since you are doing a superlative job, and I love what you've done so far- also, I recognise that there must be real limitations on what you can arrange using just {or mostly} in-game art.)
1st Mar 2013, 11:20 AM
Moeru
I'll look into it tonight when I'm working on the next page. I did this page in haste very late at night so I don't mind criticism :p
1st Mar 2013, 6:34 PM
Moeru
Updated it. Hopefully this is better :D
2nd Mar 2013, 3:41 PM
SintraEDrien
Yes, to me that looks much nicer, more romantic, like an innocent girl daydreaming. :)

Very well done.

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