As I was researching, I kinda started to enjoy this scene a bit more, since it tells a lot about the setting and the characters involved, while not explicitly saying it. As I rewrite more and more of the script to fit the WoW theme, I'm surprised and please to see how well it fits in together.
There's only one semi-major plot point I'll have to change later on, but hopefully it won't change the overall mood.
I'll do it every once in awhile. It depends if I'm in the mood to make an entire page in one sitting or not, and if I don't make mistakes that I notice only after submission.
If you have any questions, let me know :D